【雅思大作文】-【科技】鼓励老年人用高科技产品
2018-10-18
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摘要:


  今天同大家分享的是雅思大作文科技类话题,各位烤鸭们擦亮眼睛往下看吧!

  1题目
  With technology speeding up, more and more young people begin to use mobile phones and the Internet, but old people have little chance to be exposed to them. What ways could mobile phone and the Internet is useful to old people? How do old people be encouraged to use this new technology?
  2题目翻译
  老年人用科技。随着科技的发展,越来越多的年轻人开始使用手机和互联网,但是老年人几乎没有机会接触手机。网络和手机以何种方式使老年人受益?如何鼓励老年人使用高科技产品?
  3题目解析
  此题是一道科技类与家庭类结合的题目,考察的是家庭类中的老年人与年轻人的比较,以及科技类中的通讯科技。提问方式属于报告类,题目难度适中,有相似题目如下:
  1. Some people think old ages are valuable, while other think youth is more useful, what is your opinion? and discuss both views
  2.  Old generations often hold some traditional ideas on the correct way of live, think and behave. Most people argue that it is not helpful for the young generations to learn from old preparing for modern life in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
  3.  Today more and more young children have mobile phones. Critics say that this is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree? What is your own opinion?
  4. Some groups of people benefited from the modern communications technology but some people have not benefited at all. Do you agree or disagree.
  4解题思路
  1. 首先这篇文章我们可以采用四段式
  开头段:背景句+话题引出-观点
  正文段一:第一问-网络和手机以何种方式使老年人受益
  正文段二:第二问-鼓励老年人使用高科技产品的方法
  结尾段:观点+总结
  Ps:正文段如若论点够多,也可展开2段或多段
  5确定论点
  第一问:网络和手机以何种方式使老年人受益
  1. 方便老年人与家人朋友的交流与联系
  2. 对于老年人的日常生活有很大影响,例如:购物等
  第二问:鼓励老年人使用高科技产品的方法
  1. 社区举办一些学习新科技的活动
  2. 老年人自身可以更加自信一点
  6范文
  It is obvious that advanced technologies such as cellular phones or the net not only bring a lot of fun to youngsters who are always passionate to novel things, but also have an important effect on the life of senior citizens who would like to keep the pace of the age.
  Today, mobile phones are increasingly popular with old people. Unlike young people who fancy playing games or taking photos with phones, they seem to be most interested in their most basic function-communication. It is easily found that keeping in touch by mobiles with their children who live independently or study overseas has become a necessary thing in their routines. Plus, if some of old people feel physically uncomfortable or get in danger outdoors and alone, they immediately make an emergency call or inform their relatives or friends using mobile phones.
  The Internet is equally important with mobile phone in old people’s life now. Apparently, some elderly tend to surf on Internet, studying something that they are fascinated with such as calligraphy , painting and so forth; some like to meet new people online or chat with their friends by tools available on Internet such as MSN or QQ; others become accustomed to shopping online or running their own small businesses by E-bay.
  However, I must confess that some old people are afraid to try new technologies probably because they do not yet have understood or experienced them. In avoid of this, they should be encouraged to take part in some activities that are held in their community with the aim of educating them about how to use or see the new technologies. In the meanwhile, they are really supposed to be a bit more confident.(标粗为论点)
  7范文翻译
  显而易见,先进的技术,如手机或网络,不仅给那些总是热衷于新奇事物的年轻人带来很多乐趣,而且对那些想跟上时代步伐的老年人的生活也有着重要的影响。
  如今,手机越来越受到老年人的欢迎。与喜欢玩游戏或用电话拍照的年轻人不同,他们似乎最感兴趣的是他们最基本的功能——交流。人们很容易发现,用手机与独立生活或出国留学的孩子保持联系已经成为他们日常生活中不可或缺的事情。此外,如果某些老人感到身体不舒服,或在户外和独自一人处于危险之中,他们立即打紧急电话或用手机通知他们的亲戚或朋友。
  在老年人的生活中,互联网和手机同样重要。显然,有些老人喜欢上网,学习一些他们感兴趣的东西,比如书法、绘画等等;有些人喜欢在网上结识新朋友,或者通过MSN或QQ等互联网上的工具与朋友聊天;其他人则习惯于在网上购物,或通过E-BAY经营自己的小企业。
  然而,我必须承认,一些老人害怕尝试新技术,可能是因为他们还没有理解或经历过新技术。为了避免这种情况,应该鼓励他们参加一些在他们的社区举办的活动,目的是教育他们如何使用或看到新技术。同时,他们应该更自信一些。
  8范文中的高分句子
  1. It is obvious that advanced technologies such as cellular phones or the net not only bring a lot of fun to youngsters who are always passionate to novel things, but also have an important effect on the life of senior citizens who would like to keep the pace of the age.
  解析:It is obvious that为主语从句,it为形式主语,that后面是真正的主语。Not only…but also为并列结构,youngsters who are always passionate to novel thing为定语从句,senior citizens who would like to keep the pace of the age为定语从句。Advanced先进的,passionate to对…充满激情。
  2. It is easily found that keeping in touch by mobiles with their children who live independently or study overseas has become a necessary thing in their routines.
  解析:It is easily found that…为主语从句,keeping in touch by mobiles with their children为现在分词作主语,their children who live independently为定语从句。Keep in touch保持联系,keep in touch with与…保持联系
  3.  I must confess that some old people are afraid to try new technologies probably because they do not yet have understood or experienced them.
  解析:confess that后接宾语从句,because…后接原因状语从句。Be afraid of害怕,担心。Confess的同义词有:acknowledge,admit, recognize, concede
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