【雅思大作文】-【健康类】暴饮暴食
2018-11-30
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摘要:
今天满分帝同大家分享的是雅思大作文健康类话题,各位烤鸭们擦亮眼睛往下看吧!
1题目
Research shows that overeating can be just as harmful as smoking. Thus, the advertising of certain food products should be banned, as cigarette is banned in many countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
2题目翻译
研究表明,暴饮暴食如同吸烟一样对健康是有害的,因此某些食品广告应该被禁止,正如很多国家的禁烟行为一样。你在多大程度上同意或是不同意这个观点?
3题目解析
此题考查的是话题中的健康类,提问方式属于最高频的同意与否类。健康类的题目在2018年目前还没考过,属于较为低频的一类话题。有相关题目如下:
1. Nowadays, many children are not as fit and healthy as children used to be in the past. What are the causes? How could it be solved?
2. Children often eat food that is not good for their health. What is the causes of this unhealthy habits? What should be done to make children stop eating unhealthy food?
3. Health experts claim that walking is one of best forms of exercise in maintaining good health but fewer people walk now. Why do you think less people walk now? What can be done to encourage people walk more?
4. Why do you think people are not willing to spend time doing outdoor activities like hiking and mountain climbing? What are some ways for young people to love outdoor activities
4解题思路
首先这篇文章我们可以采用四段式
开头段:背景句+话题引出+亮出观点
正文段一:此类广告被禁止的理由(同意部分)
正文段二:还有其他解决健康问题的方法(不同意部分)
结尾段:观点+总结至少一个论点(观点可单独拎出来写一段)
Ps:正文段如若论点够多,也可展开2段或多段。
5确定论点
此类广告被禁止的理由(同意部分):
1. 广告的吸引力过大,尤其对于青少年来说,他们缺乏判断力,难以抵制诱惑
过渡句:
1.固定的饮食习惯是从小培养的,很难受到广告的影响
还有其他改善健康问题的方法(不同意部分):
1. 政府采取措施,如举办讲座等
2. 对于高脂肪食物加大征税
6范文
A problem of modern society is the increasing rate of obesity in the general population and one of the main causes of this worrying trend is overeating. Personally, I believe tackling this problem is likely to need more than a simple ban of advertising of food products.
While it is undeniable that advertisements of junk foods can be seen everywhere and they indeed have a strong appeal to people, particularly young children who have weak judgment and simply cannot resist temptations. However, banning these advertising is unlikely to limit the number of overeaters. As people tend to stick to the same eating habits and lifestyles that they have developed since young, it is hard to say that they will easily change these habits due to a certain kind of food advertisement. This means if a person enjoys the convenience of fast foods, he won't quit eating them whether there is an ad on these foods or not. In contrast, if people are fully aware of the dangers of overeating, or the health hazards of the junk foods, they will not buy them even if they see the ads everyday. Since the power of ads is not as immense as it is expected, banning ads might be not effective in combating this problem.
There may be better ways of tackling this overeating problem. Not every individual understands clearly about the potential risks of overeating, although they do get some knowledge from school but this is far from enough. By this I mean the government should take its citizens' health conditions seriously and take some practical measures such as publishing pamphlets on healthy eating tips and holding public lectures on healthy dieting. By educating the public, particularly the parents, there is hope that unhealthy eating habits like overeating among the young generation are likely to be eliminated. Besides, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, as rising cost might discourage production and reduce the demand.
In my opinion, focusing on banning ads is too narrow an approach and would not have desired results. People should be encouraged not only to know more about the negative effects of overeating but also to adopt a healthier lifestyle in general.(标红为核心论点)
8范文中的高分句子
1. While it is undeniable that advertisements of junk foods can be seen everywhere, they indeed have a strong appeal to people, particularly young children who have weak judgment and simply cannot resist temptations.
解析:it is undeniable that…为形式主语的用法,意为无可否认的; appeal意为吸引力; young children who…后接定语从句;resist temptation意为抵制诱惑。
2. As people tend to stick to the same eating habits and lifestyles that they have developed since young, it is hard to say that they will easily change these habits due to a certain kind of food advertisement.
解析:as引导原因状语从句;tend to do sth意为倾向于做某事;stick to意为遵守、保留;habits and lifestyles that…后接定语从句;it is hard to say that…后接宾语从句,此处不定式为真正主语;due to…后接原因状语。
3.  Not every individual understands clearly about the potential risks of overeating, although they do get some knowledge from school but this is far from enough.
解析:potential risks意为潜在危险;although引导让步状语从句;do get为强调的用法;but后接并列句表转折。
4. Besides, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, as rising cost might discourage production and reduce the demand.
解析:tax penalties意为税务惩罚;be imposed on被施加;as后接原因状语从句;rising意为日益增长的;discourage意为使减少;reduce the demand意为减少需求。
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